Friday 18 August 2017

Short Story: Ten Minutes Late

During a two day period with no internet (it's okay, we survived...) I clicked on an old folder marked 'Story Ideas', and found this, a story I wrote about two years ago and had forgotten all about.  I wrote it when I came back from shopping one day; on the bus journey there, I alerted the driver to hang on for someone who was running to catch it 😀

Ten Minutes Late

October 1974

Danny was late.  Seriously late.  He could just make out Ruth and Steve boarding the bus as he turned the corner, Ruth with her huge sketching folder, Steve with his camera bag.

            "Ruthie!" he screeched.  "Tell him to wait!"

            Alas, the noise of the dense morning traffic ensured that Danny's cries went unheard.  He hoisted his bag onto his shoulder and started to run, zig-zagging round a mum with a pushchair and a group of dawdling schoolgirls.  His bag fell off his shoulder and he stopped to hoist it back on; he had to catch that bus.  Missing it would mean an eighteen minute wait for the next, which meant he would be ten minutes late for his photography class.  Monday mornings were bad enough without disapproval from photography tutor Jim Duncan, the worst stickler for punctuality in the whole college.

The traffic was slow.  Maybe he could make it.  When he was about twenty yards short, though, he heard the whoosh of the doors closing, and the wretched vehicle began to move off.

"Wait!" he shouted, helplessly, knowing no one could hear him.  He quickened his pace, and was only feet away as the bus pulled slowly out.  Running alongside it, now, he looked through the window.  Ruth and Steve were deep in conversation and didn't see him, but in the seat behind the driver, a woman was looking his way.  He waved to her; she could alert the driver, ask him to hang on, and open the damn doors.

The woman met his eyes and he signalled to her, waving like a crazy man, pointing at the driver, but she turned her head.  She looked away as if she hadn't seen him, but she had, he knew she had.

Why didn't she help?  It wouldn't have hurt her, would it?  All she had to do was call out to the driver that someone was running to catch the bus; Danny had done that very thing himself, for other passengers.  The drivers were always happy to hang on for a couple of seconds.  But that bloody woman just couldn't be bothered.  

"Stop!" he shouted.  But the bus moved into the traffic and Danny bent over, hands on his knees, huffing and puffing.  He eased the weighty bag off his shoulder, and mooched into the shelter to sit down and wait for the 8.48. 

The other students stared as he burst in, red-faced; Jim Duncan just gave him one of his 'looks'.  A quick glance round the room told Danny that there were no spare seats apart from one at the front, next to a geeky kid he hardly knew, so there he sat.

~ ~ ~

The late arrival had no detrimental effect on Danny's college career, annoying though it was at the time.  He finished his foundation course eight months later, then went on to do two years specialising in photography.  He felt enthused, inspired, but once he had his shiny new diploma, he found that jobs in his field were hard to come by, and settled for a position on a local paper that paid a meagre wage.  When he discovered that his girlfriend, Julie, was pregnant, he took a job as a supervisor of the photography department in a large store.  Less interesting, but it paid twice as much. 

He doubted he would have married Julie had she not been pregnant, because he was not in love with her, but back in the 1970s parents of unmarried pregnant daughters still insisted on shotgun weddings.

Julie gave birth six months after the wedding, followed by two more children at three yearly intervals.  Money was always tight, but they were content enough, give or take Danny's occasional dalliances.  With the demands of a family, photography took a back seat.  He joined a camera club, and even had a few arty black and white landscapes featured in books of local interest, but his hobby never paid him more than pocket money.

"It's a shame Danny never did anything with his talent," his mother said, often.  "Still, Julie and the kids have to come first."

Danny took early retirement at fifty-five, and joined a second photography club, which was where he met Sally.  For Julie this was a dalliance too far, and she left him.  By this time the children were grown, and his betrayal of their mother soured his relationship with them.  Living with Sally did not turn out to be as much fun as their illicit affair; five years on, he was no more happy with her than he had been with Julie.  As he sank into his autumn years, he sometimes wondered if he'd missed some vital turning point somewhere, not made the most of an opportunity that might have made his life more satisfying.  Just happier would have been nice.

He had forgotten all about that Monday morning in 1974; just a few weeks after it occurred, it disappeared from his conscious memory.

Had he but known the effect of that morning on his entire life, he might have thought about it every single day.

If the woman on the bus had seen fit to alert the driver, Danny would not have been late for his class.  He already knew that - but if he'd arrived at class with eight minutes to spare, instead of ten minutes late, he would have been able to choose his seat.  Instead of sitting at the front by the geeky kid, he'd have sat further back, next to a girl he'd chatted to once or twice.  She had two tickets for an exhibition by a local photographer of some national reknown, that night; had Danny sat next to her, they would have gone for coffee together at break time, and she'd have asked him to accompany her.  Because he didn't, she asked someone else.

If Danny had gone to that exhibition, he'd have been introduced to the photographer, a woman called Laura; a friendship would begin.  Through Laura, he'd have found evening and weekend work as an assistant to a friend of hers, Guy, who ran a successful business doing portraits and weddings.

Julie would never have become part of his life, because he'd wouldn't have been at the barbecue where they met, because he was working at a wedding reception.

Eventually, he'd have dropped out of college and worked full time for Guy, discovering he had a real affinity with the customers as well as a talent for portrait work.  In time, he'd become Guy's partner, helping him to expand the business, and in his thirties he would allow Guy to buy him out, on good terms, so he could go it alone.  After entering his portraits into competitions, his work would gain critical acclaim.  He would branch out into fashion photography, become sought after, and, at the age of thirty-eight, would marry one of his favourite models.  They would have two children, an idyllic marriage, and move to New York.

By the time Danny was fifty, he would be lauded as one of the greatest fashion and beauty photographers of the age.  He and his family would holiday on Capri, and in the mountains of Aspen.  In the autumn of his years, he'd consider how blessed his life had been, and want to share his wealth.  Opening his string of hostels to care for runaway teenagers would gain him respect, and make him feel that he had done something truly worthwhile with his good fortune.  He would have been a happy man, indeed.

But none of this happened, because Danny failed to catch the 8.30 bus.


Back in 1974, the woman on the bus ignored Danny because she was bloody fed up with people who couldn't be on time.  What was so difficult about getting up when the alarm went off?  'Running late', indeed; too damn lazy to get out of bed, more like.  She'd had enough of selfish people who ruined things for others because they were too bone idle to get out of bed in the mornings.  Like her husband, and her two useless sons.

That, however, is another story.

Sunday 13 August 2017

Lindisfarne ~ Coming Soon! #PostApocalyptic #Dystopian Project Renova Book #2

Have you read Tipping Point yet?  If not, it will be on offer at just 99p/99c from September 24th ~ 30th.

.... and Lindisfarne, the sequel, will be available from the 26th.  I loved my research trips to the island, so expect to see lots of photos over the next few weeks!

Post Apocalyptic, Dystopian, mild SciFi, Romantic Suspense, Government Conspiracy.

Around 95K words (approx 4k longer than Tipping Point).

Time span and structure
January 2025 ~ May 2026.  Told from alternating points of view (if you've read Tipping Point, you may like to know that these are Vicky, Lottie, Heath, Aria, Wedge, and Doyle the data analyst from BDC).

The blurb:

Six months after the viral outbreak, civilised society in the UK has broken down.  Vicky and her group travel to the Northumbrian island of Lindisfarne, where they are welcomed by an existing community.

New relationships are formed, old ones renewed.  The lucky survivors adapt, finding strength they didn't know they possessed, but the honeymoon period does not last long.  Some cannot accept that the rules have changed, and for just a few, the opportunity to seize power is too great to pass up.  Egos clash, and the islanders soon discover that there are greater dangers than not having enough to eat.

Meanwhile, in the south, Doyle discovers that rebuilding is taking place in the middle of the devastated countryside.  He comes face to face with Alex Verlander from Renova Workforce Liaison, who makes him an offer he can't refuse.  But is UK 2.0 a world in which he will want to live? 

Lindisfarne is Book #2 in the Project Renova series.  A book of related short stories, entitled Patient Zero, features back and side-stories from minor characters, and will be available by the end of 2017.  Book #3 is due in mid 2018.