Monday, 22 July 2019

3 Misconceptions That Can Hinder New Writers

A while back I wrote an article entitled 7 Myths That Can Hold New Writers Back. Here are three more, with the subtitle 'and will prevent them publishing a really good book and finding lots of readers'.

1. If a book is good it will sell of its own accord, without the need for promotion.

Ages ago, a proofreader friend told me about one of her clients, who, though a terrific writer, hardly sold any books.  When she suggested various ways of promoting them, his reply was 'but if they're so good they should just sell, shouldn't they?'

The other day, a writer was talking to me about the fact that his books weren't selling. When I suggested methods that might change this, he replied that he didn't like 'blatant promotion', and preferred people to 'discover' his work online, by means of discussion on its subject matter.  A nice idea, but I had to stop myself saying, 'So how's that working for you?'  I looked them up; they had one review apiece, and I could see by the rankings that they hadn't sold more than a handful. 

Here's the thing.  Sure, we'd love our online activity to consist only of chatting, and to have others think, 'What a great guy!  What fascinating insight he has!  I see he's a writer; I'll go seek out his books, and buy them all!'  Yes, that will happen now and again, but, mostly, if you don't promote your books, they won't 'just sell', however fabulous they are.

Why not?  Because no one will know they exist.


Most self-pub or small indie published writers sell the majority of their books via ebook on Amazon, I find, and it's where almost all start off.  But the site contains millions of titles.  Millions.  Yours (and mine, and everyone else's) are the needle in the haystack; if you don't promote your books yourself, they will never get clicked on, bought, downloaded on Kindle Unlimited or reviewed, because they won't be seen.  Thus, they won't appear on 'also boughts' or recommendations.  They will not show up in searches.  They may as well be shut in a virtual drawer—with a padlock, for which nobody knows the combination.

No one is making you promote, if you feel it's a bit naff to do so, or not 'you', or if you just can't be bothered (see below) - that's fair enough.  Or, indeed, if you're not fussed, and are just happy to have written them; I know a few who feel this way, and you need read no further!  But if you want to sell more than the odd one here and there to your friends (real life and online), you will need to learn how to do this stuff.



2. You're 'no good at' promotion.

A while back, someone asked me to help to tweet his cut-price offer on one of his books.  He asked me, he said, because he was 'no good at' promotion.  I was happy to help as I have a silly amount of followers and the book was good, but I couldn't resist questioning this 'no good at' claim.  Did he mean he felt embarrassed promoting his own work, or that he didn't know how to?  He admitted that he actually meant he couldn't be bothered.

Building up any sort of online platform does take time, and effort, when you'd rather be writing, or watching TV, or reading, or whatever.  It means finding out how to use the site(s) of your choice, reading advice articles, following people, interacting, sharing others' stuff and taking an interest in what they do, seeking out bloggers who will feature you, thinking up ways to present your work on Twitter/instagram/Facebook, without giving your followers a virtual bludgeoning about the head (commonly known as spamming 'buy my book' tweets).  If you're not sure how, have a look at what others do.  If you would like to read some articles on this subject, click this link and go to the 'Writers and Social Media/Promotion' section.


If you feel shy about it, remember that you don't have to say 'this is a fantastic book, you totally have to read it NOW!'.  Your tweets, for instance, can show the book off like an advert, rather than telling everyone it's a #mustread, which is off-putting, anyway.  People will investigate further if they like the cover, or think the subject matter sounds interesting.  Choose a good quote from a review (not 'I couldn't put it down'), or from the book itself (a punchy one-liner, rather than detail about the plot or something that means a lot to you but doesn't work out of context), add a couple of hashtags to show the genre, and don't forget the cover - and the buy links!


3. Producing a novel is all about letting the creative juices flow.

You know how it is, when you hit on that great idea.  You mull that story around in your mind and get excited about it; you open a new document and get stuck in.  You think of new developments when you're away from it, and can't wait to get back to your desk to start making them come alive.  You think about your characters until they seem almost as real as people you know, and often more interesting.  You have moments when you can hardly type fast enough; your fingers fly over the keys, as your brain creates scenes, settings, new characters. 



Thing is, that's only the beginning.

Have you ever tried showing someone a first draft?  Did you get any of these type of reactions?

'It was great, but....
  • I didn't get that bit about Jake discovering his real father was a famous actor; it didn't go anywhere. Yes, it's a stunning revelation, and, mm-mm, I'm sure it was great fun to write, but it was like you put it in, then forgot about it.
  • I like the idea about Ella being cyber-bullied, but you've said her Mum had confiscated her phone and tablet the day before, so how would she have seen it?
  • Why have you put in a chapter about the architecture of Prague in it for?  Ah, I see.  You really wanted to write about it, because Prague is so beautiful—yes, I can see you got really carried away!  But I was waiting to get on with the story....
  • I love this fight scene, but are you sure Jim could just get up and walk away, with those sort of injuries?  Oh, I see.  He needs to be in Texas that night for the next bit of the plot.  But he'd probably be dead.  Did you not research knife wounds to the femoral artery?'
Novels need planning.  Thinking through.  Researching.  Creativity is only one part of the whole process. The first draft, that wonderful burst of creativity, is just the raw material.  



I read for Rosie Amber's Book Review Team, and one of the problems I find all too often, with self- or small indie publisher books, is that they simply need more work, to iron out clunky sentences, to get rid of long-winded descriptions, to add clarity, suspense, foreshadowing ... these are the elements that get sorted out in multiple redrafts.  You need to go back and start at the beginning, each time.  Go through it over and over.  Four, five, six and more times, however many is necessary until the book is as 'tight' as you can make it.

I'm not a perfect writer; no one is.  But you owe it to yourself to make the book as good as it can be.  I find that as I write the first draft, I realise that other sections earlier on might need some tweaking.  Or I see that more emphasis is needed on certain aspects.  To this end, I have post-it notes all over a board in front of my desk, which I put into order when I'm about to start the next draft.  They say things like 'make more clear that Byron doesn't like Hemsley', 'establish that Evie is a fabulous pastry cook', 'Need more detail about the trouble in the city before Ryder turns up'.  By the time I'm at the end of the third draft, I've got the story about right.  Then it's time to look at every sentence and see if it could be written more succinctly.  



Redraft until you're sick of the sight of it.  And then do another one.

Hope this helps!




5 comments:

  1. Oh, Terry, Number 1 reminds me of those who ask me how they can get more people to read and comment on their blog posts, but that they do not have any time to read and comment on anybody else's blog. There are a handfull of bloggers who are lucky and who it does not apply to, but you really do need to come out from under the duvet and promote your work in any way you can without being seen as a spammer. Being sociable and interacting with other writers is a huge way to promote yourself (and your books), but we must also remember that we need to respond to any comments or questions left on our social media accounts, blogs or webpages. I don't bother reading or commenting on the blog posts of those who ignore my comments. And that will mean that I won't buy their books either. May seem harsh, but none of us liked to be ignored, do we?

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    1. I know, I know, re your first comment... as we've discussed on Twitter, though, I don't see the point in commenting for a comment's sake - only if you have something to say.

      I'd never let a question or comment on Twitter go unanswered, no; that's just rude. Doesn't mean I don't occasionally miss one, though!

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    2. I share your feelings, Hugh W. Roberts...To be fair, Blogspot comments can be tricky for those not logged into some sort of Google accounts. Still I often feel that the Internet is full of people screaming for attention and I'm the *only* one who ever pauses (for breath) to "listen."

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    3. Indeed, Priscilla; I find that I can't comment on Blogger at all on my main browser, which is a pain. And yes, you have to log onto your Google account BEFORE you write the comment, or it doesn't work. Some wordpress blogs only take wordpress accounts, though, too.

      Know what you mean re the internet generally - Hugh and I were talking on Twitter about the meaninglessness of all those empty comments and likes, that are done only because people hope they'll get one back!!!

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    4. I know those empty comments have always be there, but the messages behind them only came to my attention during my recent blogging break, Terry and Priscilla. I'm very lucky that I get lots of comments left on most of my blog posts (and I always respond to them), but some of those comments aren'r really necessary and don't add any value to my post. I'd much rather have a reader leave a meaningful comment once every three months than leave short empty comments on every single blog post I publish.

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